I just finished a paper i have to due for English. Basicly, what I had to do is write a one paragraph letter to my teacher telling her about one main thing about me. but i have to make it from an inanimate object!
she gave us an example where the letter was from her van, and the letter was about how she likes to travel.
So anyway, I was wondering if you guys could help me out with any mispellings, or stuff like that. Here’s the letter:
**By the way, I’m replacing my teachers name with Mrs. Smith. and my last name with Fink. and my birthday with something random**
Dear Mrs. Smith,
Hi! I’m Matt Fink’s iPod Touch. I’ve been with Matt since June 26th (His birthday) last year, and if you should know one thing about Matt, it’s that he loves music, and in many ways! He began his intrest in music in kindergargen, when he started playing violin, and now he plays many more instruments such as the bass guitar, and guitar! Another example of his love for music is me, his iPod! He has over 300 songs, and several music videos. But probably the most important thing about his passion for music is that he loves so many types of music! He enjoys rock, electronic, classical, and some hip-hop! So as you can see, music is a big part of Matt’s life, and I hope you get to know more about him as the year goes on!
Sincerely,
Matt’s iPod Touch
Dear Mrs. Smith,
Hi! I’m Matt Fink’s iPod Touch. I’ve been with Matt since June 26th (his birthday) last year, and if you should know one thing about Matt, it’s that he loves music, and in many ways! His interest in music began in kindergarten, when he started playing the violin, and now he plays many more instruments such as the bass guitar and the acoustic guitar! Another example of his love for music is me, his iPod! I look after over 300 of his songs and several music videos. But probably the most important thing about his passion for music is that he loves so many types of music! He enjoys rock, electronic, classical as well as some hip-hop! So, as you can see, music is a big part of Matt’s life, and I hope you get to know more about him as the year goes on!
Sincerely,
Matt’s iPod Touch
NOTE: Nice. Perhaps consider not overusing exclamation marks, unless you’re going for a deliberate effect.